work on those mouth shapes. look up blair mouth shapes. it teaches you what exactly your mouth does wth each syllable. also the rest of the animation was not very good. and the perspectiveo n the ground was really off. voice acting too was really awkward. good first try tho
this wasn't a serious thing, but I think I have improved if you check my newest animation : ALIEN
i hate pokemon so i loved this. fantastic
i didnt get it. gave me a quarter chub.
work on those mouth shapes. when the mouth opens the jaw should to. you have a nice dirty aesthetic though
the constant shaking bothered me. dont have one frame thats shaking back and forth. just draw the same frame like twice to give it a boil.
Hey, thanks for replying. I was trying a different style for this, one that was intentionally erratic and un-still. I understand what you mean though, check out my other animations for a more traditional approach. Just, for this one, I wanted to try this out. Ya either like it or ya don't I suppose.
i liked the timing. blood could have been redder.
I'm still experiencing with colors and yeah, I agree now that you mention it. Making the blood redder would've been a perfect contrast to the rest of the grayness. Thanks for mentioning it!
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