work on those mouth shapes. look up blair mouth shapes. it teaches you what exactly your mouth does wth each syllable. also the rest of the animation was not very good. and the perspectiveo n the ground was really off. voice acting too was really awkward. good first try tho
this wasn't a serious thing, but I think I have improved if you check my newest animation : ALIEN
i hate pokemon so i loved this. fantastic
i didnt get it. gave me a quarter chub.
your flow was pretty good. you vocals and beat needed to be mixed better and the autotune at the end was atrocious. other than that i enjoyed it.
I normally am not a huge house music fan but i really liked this! A problem i normally have with house music is that its way to repetitive(i know a stupid problem to have considering its house music) but this music is jammin!
thanks for the feedback ;)
i really like the melody i just wish the drums were a bit more punchy.
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